Discuss the consequences to patients and contractors of a reduction in the number of community pharmacies, from the current level of 11,500 in England to a figure of 8000, given that this may be the consequences of the present reduction in funding.

Discuss the consequences to patients and contractors of a reduction in the number of community pharmacies, from the current level of 11,500 in England to a figure of 8000, given that this may be the consequences of the present reduction in funding.

• The references are poorly quoted. Use more reliable references like journals. So I want to have 5 references (journals)
• The introduction is not relevant. It needs to be improved
• There is too many quotes and figures
• Where are the solutions? How are these issues can be dealt with?
• What are the issues that are going to happen? How can these issues be addressed? You need to establish an argument?
• How will the MUR be affected by these changes (NHS cuts)?
• There is a statement that says “Community pharmacy is corner centre for fighting with diseases and ill medical conditions, provision of healthy services and care and support services on short and long term basis and development of integrated and complex models. To focus on all these factors it is required to be funded form external authorities”. My tutor was not happy with this statement she said “pharmacy offers services that are complementary to the rest of NHS” and she said we are not actually “fighting with diseases”.
• She also mentioned that I have not thought through argument and she said that I need to mention what will be the consequences in the reduction in services?

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